I was born Texas i lived most of my life indoors cause i was a not the outdoor kind of guy. I loved to play video games with my friends and family. I would occasionally play board games such as Life or Monopoly. As a kid i played sports but i did not enjoy them. Sometimes i would go to the beach and play in the water. I enjoyed life to the fullest not a moment did i forget when i grew up. In my young youth me and my family moved to NJ in the 5th grade i made a lot of new friends. Now im in 8th grade and i have published my first book. In the future i feel like growing up to be a teacher so i can teach the next generation.

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Watch your grammar. Outdoor guy plays video games? Contradictory and a little confusing. Then you say in your teens you moved to NJ, then go back to 5th grade - be careful that if you are writing in chronological order

r, you stay consistent. ~Rose Bates